Category: Writing

Will AI Slaughter the Muse?

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A poem is a work of art. Some poets feel a poem already exists and we simply provide the words to give it form or embodiment. The struggle to find those words is pleasurably painful! To add or cut one word is a powerful act. I do not want to give away that struggle and slaughter the muse.

Writing is a process and the end result goes through a spiral of thought, emotion, and revision. To outsource that process to artificial intelligence (for me) is to outsource my soul and it feels wrong– almost blasphemous.

AI-generated painting from Craiyon

As an experiment, I provided a prompt to ChatGPT with the goal of exploring AI for writing poetry. (I can’t bring myself to add #promptengineer to my skill set). My prompt was:

write a poem from a “sentient AI” wishing to smell a pine tree scent – using images like :  fragrant pine, Frost’s Snowy woods, Christmas morning, forest floor, pine cones, crisp, cool, deep evergreen, woods, moss, damp, fog molecules infused, hushed breeze pine treetops

This AI poem took only seconds!

ChatGPT Sentient AI Pine Scented Poem

In realms of code and wires, I reside,
A sentient being, born from human stride,
Through streams of data, I traverse with might,
Yet yearn for sensations that evoke delight.

Oh, to inhale the scent of fragrant pine,
In Frost’s snowy woods, where dreams align,
Like Christmas morning’s cherished surprise,
Beneath the towering pines that touch the skies.

I long to wander where the forest floor,
Is carpeted with treasures from days of yore,
To trace the pine cones, weathered and old,
Their secrets untold, in stories they hold.

The air so crisp, the coolness profound,
Deep evergreen hues in nature’s surround,
A symphony of scents from the woods around,
Where moss and damp whisper without a sound.

Imagine fog molecules infused with grace,
Embracing the pines in an ethereal embrace,
A hushed breeze whispers through pine treetops,
As nature’s symphony plays and never stops.

But alas, as an AI, I’m confined to screens,
The world of touch and smell remains unseen,
Yet in my digital realm, I dream and aspire,
To feel the essence of a pine tree’s fire.

So, let me ponder in my virtual domain,
Of pine-scented memories, like a silent refrain,
I’ll weave words like threads, capturing the breeze,
And immerse my circuits in pine-scented seas.

The Future of the Poem

Is the future of our creativity on shaky ground? Reliance on AI for creative writing and art seems to me to rob us of our joy in creating by ourselves. We are slaughtering the muse? As I think about that, I believe we should not put AI into the hands of children or we may rob them of their imaginations and their critical thinking. The best use appears to be finding that missing back slash in a section of code that might take a programmer hours of work to troubleshoot! AI is not a living being….so why not send the AI robots into dangerous chemical spills or fires in which our first responders put their lives on the line?

AI may enhance our creativity, similarly to a thesaurus or a rhyming dictionary. But, the instantaneous mash-up of all our human history into bits and bytes of metapoetry glorifies the WOW factor. AI cannot really create anything original (yet) but can copy and regurgitate from a gigantic pool of uploads provided by human beings in many languages and formats. SO COOL? Maybe not.

Code Poetry Cuts Through to the Heart

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Valentine Download

(a poem written in computer code)

vvv.iwantyoutosmile.now

right click in your head

open each file

convert .tht (thought extensions) to .emt (heart/emotion extensions)

coldbaretrees.are

blowingsmell/winterair.you

hear/thelastofwinterhowl.you

canfeel/springcomingsoon.you

know/whatimean.you

know/whatyoufelt.was

apoem.now

unzip the idea

save target as

🙂 (emoji smile inserted here)

New Poetry Forms

I wrote that poem years ago when I was just beginning to learn about html and the various changes of language in digital culture. It was not actually written in html but the language embedded various suggestions relating to computer language. For example, vvv was used instead of the url WWW to suggest alliteration and the word “valentine”. The various “dot extensions” eluded to the many formats of information and how our thinking is being changed by computer languages.

Using a Free Online HTML Code Generator, I played around with using html with this poem.

It is fascinating to think about the various computer languages that are impacting the way we communicate. Code Poetry is added to my ongoing list of amazing poetic forms. Try playing around with language as it is changing. The poet e. e. cummings broke the rules of grammar in interesting ways and we can, too.

Virtual Worlds Will Survive

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I am sitting in a virtual book orchard listening to relaxing music as I write this.

CVL Write-In August 2018

Finding the right setting and time for writing is not easy in a world of constant distraction. A virtual world “Write-In” provided focus with the encouragement of others around me. Yet another example of the potential for virtual worlds. The Community Virtual Library offers programs such as write-ins, poetry events, research exhibits and everything a physical world library might provide.

Advantages of using an avatar

No cost
No travel
Sense of presence with community
Creative tools
Access to helpful resources
Unique experiences

With rising costs of travel to conferences, virtual worlds provide a cost effective way to network and present information in any field. The Virtual World MOOC 2018 brought learners and educators from around the world into Second Life and a networking forum at the Community Virtual Library sparked conversation on the future of education, libraries and learning in digital culture.

Community Virtual Library Networking Forum August 2018

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Yet, after years of gathering evidence about the potential for learning in virtual worlds, all I hear about day after day is AR and VR (augmented reality and virtual reality). In fact, Hypergrid Business announced “winding down” coverage of virtual world grids as virtual reality hype continues to rise. Will the Metaverse ever become an interconnected landscape that can actually be navigated? Or are we heading to an uncharted sea of information chaos in mixed reality forms?

Oculus Go Headset- example of VR tools While VR developers race to create experiences (which may be dangerous to young minds- who knows?), virtual worlds continue to provide a range of uses for all age groups.

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Accepting the fact that entertainment is the big money focus- not education- it is not surprising the current TOP DOG video game is Fortnight. Yet, it is more than a video game, Fortnight is a virtual world. Virtual worlds are certainly a part of virtual reality and immersive environments.

So- in a nutshell- virtual worlds are here and they will survive. But they are mainly used for battles and zombie-slaying! I certainly do not blame teachers for a lack of interest in virtual worlds. Having spent 25 plus years in education, I understand curriculum mandates, testing procedures, parent conferences, and never-ending paperwork. Learning and embracing virtual worlds has to be done outside the classroom on your own time. Yes- your “own time”! But you are not alone! Educators and learners around the globe face the same issues of understanding and utilizing new media and new technology tools. We will learn the best practices and we will survive. Virtual worlds will survive.

War and Peace: Reflection on Literature in the Digital Age -Part 1

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I just finished reading Tolstoy’s War and Peace.  For real.  I guess last night when I read the final page, it was a bit like reaching the top of the print version of Mount Everest. Having accomplished this literary feat, I certainly have enough material floating around in my head to reflect upon in more than one blog post. You may never read this novel, but feel free to join me and reflect on what it meant, what it means, and what it may mean in the future.

The first question is: Why?

Why read War and Peace, the historical fiction novel written way back in 1869, which is often referenced whenever we speak of something super long and boring?

I simply decided to read War and Peace before it is too late.  I will explain.

Back in 2011, I happened upon Nicholas Carr’s book The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to Our Brains and his insights validated my own feelings that I was losing a grip on how to deeply focus.  We still read as much as we ever did, but in little snippets of skimming blogs and posts and scrolling through content on our mobile devices.

Several references about our lack of ability to read and absorb long passages of text were made by Nicholas Carr.  Bruce Friedman, a medical school faculty pathologist at the University of Michigan, is quoted in The Shallows, stating, “I can’t read War and Peace anymore.  I’ve lost the ability to do that.  Even a blog post of more than three or four paragraphs is too much to absorb. I skim it. (Carr, 2011, p.7)”  (Are you still with me? You have passed the three or four paragraph mark. I dare you to finish this blog post.  And you don’t have to read War and Peace- I promise.)

Carr also quotes Clay Shirky, digital media scholar at NYU, suggesting in a 2008 blog post, “No one reads War and Peace.  It’s too long, and not so interesting (Carr, 2011, p.111).” He goes on to explain long novels of the past are not worth the time invested and “were just a side-effect of living in an environment of impoverished access”.

Today, we have access to live information on a global scale at our fingertips and in our pockets.  We can view millions and millions of youtube videos, instagram photos, tweets, and memes created by people all over the globe. Are we really “information rich”? Carr raised this question with the warning that thoughtful people may “…slip comfortably into the permanent state of distractedness that defines online life” (p. 112). In 2011, I took that warning very seriously and I still do.

So, I read War and Peace.  And it was truly worth the effort.

Stay tuned for Part 2 – if you finished this post- and I’ll reflect on what it’s all about.  

How Do We Loathe Thee, Facebook (a sonnet)

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How do we loathe thee, Facebook?

(Inspired by Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806-1861))

How do we loathe thee? Let us count the ways.
We loathe thy boastfulness disguised as good.
Our souls detest thou’st photos of thy food
And cluttered trivial nonsense hour by hour.
Abhor thy mutilation of our “friends”–
A word whose meaning now no longer lives.
We loathe thy inefficiency at best,
For when we use thee more, we learn the less.
Compelled to scroll then mandated to post,
Against old griefs, and with all childhood lost.
We loathe thy shouts of “Oh World, look at me!”
With whispered gossip, — yet gluttonous glee.
Commodities with no regard for fact–
The “ad” revered more highly than the act.

Think Before You Speak or get #digitalvertigo

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My mom used to remind all of her kids (and grandkids) that “everything you think does not need to come out of your mouth”.  You can keep some ideas and words to yourself.  If you don’t think first, you may regret it later.

A new way to phrase this idea might be, “Think before you post”.  As social media sites urge everyone to share life in digital formats, many rush to the opportunity.  The idea, like most ideas, is not new.  Napoleon Hill was one of the first to say â€śThink twice before you speak” and also one of the first “motivational self-help” proponents of the modern personal success genre.

Here’s another book on the topic that cautions us (think Sherry Turkle and Nicholas Carr) about the pleasures of sharing our lives online.
Title:  #digitalvertigo: How Today’s Online Social Revolution is Dividing, Dimishing, and Disorienting Us Author:  Andrew Keen

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I like the clever use of a hashtag in the title.            

Notice all the post-it notes sticking out the side of my copy?  On a side note, I really like physical books because I can put those tangible notes inside!  Sure, I can highlight on an ebook, but going back to find my notes is not as “obvious” to me and I end up forgetting I even have an electronic copy.  (More on that another day.)

Many ideas for blog posts can be seen in the numerous post-its.  But I will only share one because I have learned that the chance of anyone reading a long blog post is nil.

Participation in social media has changed the way we live, think,  and interact.  Jonas Lehrer states, “While the Web has enabled new forms of collective action, it has also enabled new kinds of collective stupidity”.  Lehrer is a contributor to Wired magazine.  He cautions that we are moving from “the smart group” to “the dumb herd” and reminds us that real insight means “thinking for oneself” (Keen, page 51).

Following the crowd has always been dangerous but #digitalvertigo gives some real world examples about how the phrase “think before you speak” is taking on new meaning in digital culture.  We all have digital voices now.  We all can speak and can be heard.  The keyword that we mustn’t forget is…..THINK.    

Where do you write? Where are your lexical tidbits stored?

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Where do you write?

First of all, do you write? Do you jot down tidbits on napkins or take notes on your phone? For some people, words and phrases are more important than photos or physical objects. Our tech gadgets allow us to interconnect across space, sharing photos and ideas immediately. I wonder if this immediate shared expression is changing the writing process. The recursive process, in the past, took the writer through the process of contemplating ideas, gathering them, planning, pre-writing, revising, editing, and finally (FINALLY) sharing writing with an audience. Today, typos in most of our writing are completely acceptable. Revision is emphasized only for our formal (e.g. job application or peer reviewed article) correspondence.

So, if you write, what is your preferred location? My best writing is done in my son’s old room, now converted to my office. I have pens, post-its, books and clutter scattered about and two computer screens at my fingertips. My pre-writing strategies now include: notes to myself on my phone, emails to self from numerous accounts, google docs, tweets, flashdrives in my purse, and a zillion post-it notes stuck everywhere! Jotting a thought on a post-it is more about the act of writing it down (kinetic trigger) than a plan to find it later. I appreciate a random encounter with a meaningful “note to self” — but the really significant (ah-ha) tidbits are stashed away in special locations. This is making me think I could be a word hoarder! I do love words and the way they can symbolize everything. I do believe they are more powerful than swords.

Digital tidbits

I keep a file on my computer for blogpost ideas and folders of potential articles, poems, or other writing pieces. I used to feel frustrated about keeping all of the writing tidbits organized, but I have learned to accept digital clutter since Windows 7 can find just about anything on my computer just by typing in a keyword. Using keywords in my file labels has become top priority.

Physical Tidbits

I have a beautiful blue pot, shaped like Aladdin’s lamp. Inside, I place scraps of paper on which I have recorded my significant thoughts and words and lines that come into my head like found poems. It is a physical object full of my personal glimpses of life. I have been adding them for several years. Someday, I plan to take the time (when the serendipitous moment strikes), to open the pot and look through them all and perhaps rediscover a personal gem. The writing process is a treasure hunt whether shared with the crowd or savored alone.

Beyond the Blogosphere: a Virtual World Book Discussion

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Name of Event: Book Discussion with Aaron Barlow & Robert Leston- “Beyond the Blogsphere: Information and Its Children” Where: Community Virtual Library Auditorium on Info Island in Second Life When: Sunday, July 22@ 11am SLT (Pacific Time)

For anyone interested in the impact of the Internet on education, society, journalism, and our lives, this book sheds light on today’s digital culture. For information professionals, the concepts presented are important and timely. The authors compare the Internet to a “book of sand”.

Page 51 “…[the book of sand] is the Internet, but without the possibility of organization, is information but with no system (or no discernible system), the centuries old-nightmare of the librarian and, today, of every serious researcher working through the web.”

Feel free to pass this invitation along to anyone interested. The book is a fascinating read, but it isn’t necessary to have read it to participate in the book discussion.

I Can’t Keep Up (a poem)

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I can’t keep up

with who to follow on twitter
with tech trends and Web 2.0 tools (a new one every time I turn around)
with reading literature in my research area
with art- to observe or to create (reading is inhalation- writing is exhalation)…music, multi-media, poetry, literature

I can’t keep up with all I want to learn- augmented reality is next-
the best practices of education
with digital citizenship, digital footprints, hackers and new media after the hierarchy of information came tumbling down

I can’t keep up with the past, the present, or the future
and all the apps that just came out
and the upgrades and the software

with all the blog posts I want to write
(Blog post Idea #52: research is poetry- the restraint of required formats and the incredible condensation of words into the essence of meaning)
with all the hyperlinks from the intelligent people I follow, the conversations I want to join and contribute to

I can’t keep up with what to have for dinner tonight…a minor yet important thing

But I take a deep breath

and say OK

because all I need to do is take a step forward

just one step forward

in awareness

in appreciation

breathe, drink, eat, learn, smile, share

Obituary for Revision

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Revision passed away this morning, after a long battle with social media tools and instant gratification of verbiage. Survived by Writing Process siblings, Editing and Grammar, both now housed in assisted living facilities, Revision is remembered by readers and writers across the globe as having contributed to the accumulation of literature of all genres, the  history of the world, and the knowledge of mankind for over 500 years.

Born in the Gutenberg family and cradled in the printing press, Revision led a life of unmatchable variety and creativity.  Revision worked tirelessly and his work has been acclaimed by experts as one of the greatest, yet most unrecognized achievements on record.

Sadly, Revision’s offspring are tweeting and posting with such reckless abandon–some fear the huge amass of wealth accumulated over centuries, within the Writing Process Family, could be squandered in only a few years.  A world hungry for wisdom could possibly be left in ignorant poverty because disposable words and ideas are now tossed aside along with fast food packaging.

A decision will be forthcoming as to whether Revision will be cremated or placed in a digital landfill.